Nothing in the manifesto that I would disagree with - and that may be its only real fault. Who's gonna say "no I want an Alliance that emphasises zero fun and a throwaway attitude to pilots plus no ambition to hold space"? They are all worthy and laudable goals, my only real suggestion is that a "road-map" or a timetable might give it some focus. Something along the lines of - "by January to be able to field a Battleship fleet with Triage Carriers" (or whatever) but a bit more specific to argue over.